I love this Nik. This is so rich and so full. It is a wonderful piece… and I will go to bed tonight with all the pieces of my life with ‘her’ laid out in my head… and maybe my mind will be dull in the morning… maybe. I can at least hope that it will be.WowD
A lovely piece of writing, Nik. Well done.I’ve just rejected four flash submissions for my collaborative blog which each ran to over 800 words, but didn’t manage to convey half the emotion that I found in your piece. Beautiful.
Hullo Jane! You can come here again! Thank you, both for reading and for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that.Do you have a link to the flash collaboration? I’d love to see it.Nik
I love this Nik. This is so rich and so full. It is a wonderful piece… and I will go to bed tonight with all the pieces of my life with ‘her’ laid out in my head… and maybe my mind will be dull in the morning… maybe. I can at least hope that it will be.WowD
Lovely to see this one in print, Nik, a beautiful story, very very powerful, evocative. Wow is right!
Excellent writing, Nik. Real impact. Terrific.
Excellent writing, Nik. Real impact. Terrific.
Really liked that Nik. Love the last line.
Thanks so much, one and all. (Though I do sincerely hope that I’ve not been responsible for the dulling of anyone’s mind…!)
A lovely piece of writing, Nik. Well done.I’ve just rejected four flash submissions for my collaborative blog which each ran to over 800 words, but didn’t manage to convey half the emotion that I found in your piece. Beautiful.
Hullo Jane! You can come here again! Thank you, both for reading and for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that.Do you have a link to the flash collaboration? I’d love to see it.Nik
Of course I do!http://greylingbay.blogspot.com/I hope to see you there soon.